overall they like the theme of it
need a different way of presenting it.
could try to make it a layered look with string and explore more of a 3D approach.
put the words in the location
it is not an interesting layout.
try different colours with the different languages
interesting concept
add colour and key
might look good as a series
screenprint it¨
like the overlapping but it would need to be screen printed
could try to illustrate landmarks you pass
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