edits

i talked to Dom and Orlando and they suggested adding more tracing paper pages to the book as to showcase the two different sides of the book. on the history bit, they suggested to add more information and lean into the history of Folehavna. in the new part, they suggested adding tracing paper and having the parts that are meant to draw people in be cut out.

they also suggested changing that paper from what I had in my test to something thinner that would print images better so ill explore a bit more with that.


I have also had to re illustrate the cannon base as the original image is too pixelated.

i also simplified it. 

I'm not the best at this but I did my best.

I think it should have put a bit more time into it.