Silent crit

The tally of what they would recommend continuing with:

1 II

2 I

3 I

4 II

5 II

6

7 I

improvements notes

1

could incorporate the chapters?

experiment with the type

change the font

conventional typeface

how can you be more unique

2

more impactful if the type was the right way around
experiment with directions or colour find a rule for it
a bit difficult to read

3

do not do the white on white

use the whole side of the card

work on type

possibly do not use a plain background colour

experiment with type

serif type possibly

create your own type

need more development

4

needs to be lighter

obnoxious texture, use something else, tax forms...

5

looks like it is from a horror film 

try a different font

 keep it simple

6

7

use italic

With the feedback I honestly agree with most of it, they all need a bit of development as they are not anywhere near perfect. I will try the suggestions that they came with as it could create new designs in some cases. 

this was the first silent crit that was actually helpful, for the development of the designs. 

I don't think that they all looked through all of them, they probably just stopped at five, an therefore there ware not that much feedback on the last two designs, but that is understandable.