friday

we came in a bit early as to prep for the presentation

we made some minor design changes as Sharmita had some small missing bits and they said it had to look great it did not take all that long. it was moera bout using the lgot type on the parts that needed it and having the right pictures on the persentation.

• use the typeface on the Instagram

i agree.

• faded screen print

that is also part of the charm of screenprints, we did have some issues with hte screen but i think we made it work.

• smoother gifs

that could have been worked on but we also only had a week.

• a lot of vinyl did not seem necessary 

in the actual exhibition sample they would be more spaced out but we also did not have anything to look around and actually showcase how it is going to work.

• the invite did not work well

it might not be perfect but it is our concept as we currently stand. It is realted and it does tie to the theme so so i believe it works with the theme.

• the latest Instagrams does not work as well as the previous ones

they might not be the strongest ones but they are also there to showcase their peoples work so they are not to be all that flashy, I did say that the colours of the background should be the same but that did not get changed so oh well.

• rethink the alignment

The type layout in the poster is based on a six by six grid and the type is not set to the grid, it is more there incase we did not know where something might go.

• needed more reasoning for the x's of the typeface

that is something to find in the development pages I guess, but we based it on the geometric typeface Futura as in reference to our shapes and the x's were put there as to reference the theme and the cutoff points are based on the angles of compasses.

• more inventive with the vinyl

I feel like we were quite inventive in that it is an unconventional treasure map.

• landscape poster on the invite

that could work well but I did not have the time or energy to do that this week in addition to everything else.

• window vinyl should have been done in blue

that might stand out a bit more we did talk about having the type in blue but the people deciding it wanted to keep it consistent.

• typeface need more development

yes.

• have some more information as to how we are to showcase the work

we did mention that they were not to have a particular order to keep with the concept of being lost.

• justify the chopping of the typeface

we did talk about that in the question part.

• what could have been put in the invite?

nothing we wanted to keep it simple and none is really interested in stickers I at least doubt it, and if there were to be stickers anywhere it would be at the exhibition not in the invitation.

• could the typeface been taken further

probably

• could the concepts been developed more it all looks the same

in the briefing, they did talk about consistency and I feel like we did accomplish that for the most part.

• look too childlike

let's agree to disagree. I spent time to make the design balanced with hand made playful elements and clean digital elements as to not make it too childish.

• too simple

other commented that it was too busy i guess it depends on how you view it.

• room mockup seems a bit too busy 

the thing with the room mockup is that it would be insufficient to mockup the entire room so we stuck with the sketches as they got the point across and made some physical versions to showcase how it would look like in reality.