overall the feedback said that the belly bind is needed, most of them suggested to go for the blue one. other suggested creating a version that is duotone as to showcase the feel of both sides of the book, with the green fresh colour and the deep blue side, I might try that.
Someone said that the concept could be clearer and someone even suggested to have a german explanation in the back of the book, which I do not understand as it is not related to Germany in most ways other than the starting region of ww2. So I'm nor doing that, some also said that it could benefit with an introduction at that start, but that is sort of there already, soo, probably not gonna read too much into that.
they suggested adding some thicker tracing paper, which I would if there was any at the library atm, but in the final one, it should be at least 75gsm. so hopefully that would be resolved when digitally print it.
overall most understood that book even if they were unable to read what is written which is good and the main reason why I wrote a shitty rationale. they liked the binding I think as they said that it worked to showcase the two themes of the book.
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