Dom crit

she did not like the title font or the illustrations.
they suggested getting someone to take the photos for the pamphlets but I already tried that and none is able to do that. they suggested changing the illustrator or altering the illustrations to add some circles. I have asked her but I'm not willing to change the illustrator as I do like the look of it, and I sort of want to stick to my guns. as I think they add a personal touch to the otherwise quite sterile design.
for the penguin brief, they said to make my own and do it for a different company so that I wouldn't be restricted by the visual language of penguin as it is quite dry, and id like to do something a bit fun. so I need to create a brand and showcase the app or function of the Spotify for books idea.

I had this idea that I could do either a barebones and focus on the book or possibly do a colour centered design. I need to take into account the things that elmwood said this morning about creating a brand.