I order to present the item as a legitimate product I needed a short copy for the back and sides as I’ve sort of got the hang of the front. I also needed to add braile and figure out how to write that..
Copy
I needed to contain some side effects as well as benefits and the contents of the box.
feedback
I talked to Sadie and she suggested adding elements from the Instagram and pamphlet into the packaging and add decorative braille on the box. She suggested adding a big circle with the logo on, but I'm not sure whether that would work ill try it but i don't think it would come across as a medical item, but rather a perfume yet again.
I think that the braille elements would probably help in developing a cohesive brand, as the marketing and packaging work separately and not cohesively
I tested and reconfigured the front page with the big circle idea, but the end result is a bit clumsy. The front does no longer have that stong of a link to the actual product, therefore ill not continue with this or implement the circle or the new layout of the front and side.
I tested applying the braille in different sizes and colours to the box and I quite like the outcome, I feel like it has more of a hopeful look to it. it seems less purely medical, it hints more at the fact that you can improve your life with this.

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